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giving advice to friEschool

giving advice to friEschool 8Gyjr
Dear my friend. You asked advice from me about your school. You will leave from your school at the moment. You said I do not like possibility in my schools. Also you would like study to not bedroom in school. Your aim is study in the simple school. I gave advice to stay in your school. Because no many for study in street. Your parent want you are over of school to be you are great person soon. Receive to your parents advice. They are correspond goodness for you. Walk to good way. Do not smoking. Do not drink of wine. I think you are try become well human. You have got chance. You become brave and clever man. Please. Study of your speciality subjects. Help to the people. You are happy person. You understand to this. Win to laziness. Believe to you. Please. You have more world-view. I wish you are manager. Need English and history to manager. the with best wishes from your friend Mukhammad. THAN
Dear my friend. You asked advice from me about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. You will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
from your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
at the moment.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
said I do not like possibility in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
schools
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
you would like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
to not bedroom in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. Your aim is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in the simple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. I gave advice to stay in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in street. Your parent want you are over of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
to be you
Please check whether an article is missing: "are a great" or "are an great"
are great
person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Receive to your parents advice. They are
Consider using a past participle here: "corresponded".
correspond
goodness for you. Walk to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way. Do not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "smoke"?
smoking
. Do not drink of wine. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you are
Probably a preposition is missing after 'try'.
try become
well human. You have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
chance. You become brave and clever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Study
of your
Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.
speciality
subjects.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Help
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. You
Please check whether an article is missing: "are a happy" or "are an happy"
are happy
person. You understand to this. Win to laziness.
The usual collocation for "Believe" is "in" not "to". Did you mean "Believe in"?
Believe to
you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
. You have more world-view. I wish you are manager. Need English and history to manager.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
with best wishes from your friend
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mukhammad
.
Did you mean "Then"?
THAN
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IELTS letter giving advice to friEschool

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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