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You are a member of reading club. We are going to create a new website. We need some valunteers to answer students questions. Would you like to be a volunteer and why do you think you are the most suitable candidate? Give your suggestions

You are a member of reading club. We are going to create a new website. We need some valunteers to answer students questions. Would you like to be a volunteer and why do you think you are the most suitable candidate? Give your suggestions Dq8Vj
Dear Secretary I am writing in response to your email pertaining to my volunteering. Firstly during my last participation in the reading club I found the staff well-disposed towards members which could alter my mood, realise my physical tension. With regard to opening a new website for students, helping them is pivotally essential which can activate their brain, increase their cognitive abilities and activate their brain. So there is no doubt that I am willing to be a valunteer, owing to the fact that I have read a plethora of books and I have high level diplomas and the C1 certificates of British council pertaining to reading. I trust that I will be able to answer students questions with gratitude. Perhaps you could make a general announcement calling valunteers. I would even be blissfully happy to take on the responsibility myself. I am looking forward respond from you and I hope my recommendations are acceptable. Your early response will enable me to decide fast. Yours faithfully Firuza Mukhtarova
Dear Secretary

I am writing in response to your email pertaining to my volunteering.

Firstly
during my last participation in the reading club I found the staff well-disposed towards members which could alter my mood,
realise
my physical tension.

With regard to opening a new website for students, helping them is
pivotally
essential which can activate their brain, increase their cognitive abilities and activate their brain.
So
there is no doubt that I am willing to be a
valunteer
, owing to the fact that I have read a plethora of books and I have high level diplomas and the C1 certificates of British council pertaining to reading.

I trust that I will be able to answer students questions with gratitude.

Perhaps you could
make
a general announcement calling
valunteers
. I would even be
blissfully
happy to take on the responsibility myself.

I am looking forward respond from you and I hope my recommendations are acceptable.

Your early response will enable me to decide
fast
.

Yours
faithfully


Firuza
Mukhtarova
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IELTS letter You are a member of reading club. We are going to create a new website. We need some valunteers to answer students questions. Would you like to be a volunteer and why do you think you are the most suitable candidate? Give your suggestions

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6.0
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