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Apology for lost book in the street

Apology for lost book in the street 2xA0J
Dear my best friend. Hi Ma'ruf. How are you? I hope you will understand when I say that. I lost your book. Iapologize for that. Iam trying to find this book. But I can not find it. I lost the book near the cafe. The cafe was on "Soybo'yi " street. What is was the name of this book? I did not read his name at school. I will to find this book. But, if I can not find it, I bought another book. Your book must be voulable to you. I could not find your book in library yes as it is one of the rare books. And finaly I found your book. he book was in a grocery store near the cafe. I sent it in the mail. Your book has been with me for a long time. I apologize for that. Your best friend: Akbarov Yahyobek.
Dear my best friend.

Hi Ma'
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ruf
. How are you? I hope you will understand when I say that. I lost your
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book
.
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Iapologize
for that.
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Iam
trying to
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find
this
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book
.
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But
I can not
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find
it. I lost the
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book
near the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. The
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cafe
was on
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"
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Soybo
'
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yi
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"
street. What
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is
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was
the name of this
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book
? I did not read his name at school. I will to
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find
this
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book
.
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But
, if I can not
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find
it, I
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bought
another
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book
. Your
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book
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must
be
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voulable
to you. I could not
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find
your
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book
in library yes as it is one of the rare
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books
. And
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finaly
I found your
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book
.
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he
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book
was in a grocery store near the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. I
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sent
it in the mail. Your
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book
has been with me for a long time. I apologize for that.

Your best friend:
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Akbarov
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Yahyobek
.
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IELTS letter Apology for lost book in the street

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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