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Read the email from Lucy, an exchange student. Then write a reply of about 100 words, answering Lucy's questions. To: From: Lucy Hi! I’m a student at Marwell High School in England and I’m your exchange student! Write to me and tell me about yourself. How old are you? What are you interested in? What’s a typical school day like at your school? What would you like to know about me?

Read the email from Lucy, an exchange student. Then write a reply of about 100 words, answering Lucy's questions. To: From: Lucy Hi! I’m a student at Marwell High School in England and I’m your exchange student! Write to me and tell me about yourself. How old are you? What are you interested in? What’s a typical school day like at your school? What would you like to know about me? peE52
Hi Marysa, Hope this email finds you well. I'm Dutch girl from a small town near Amsterdam. I’m 24 years old. I live together with my family and have five family members. I'm interested in film and movies. In my free time, I really like most watching Korean drama movies and K-pop musics. Moreover I'm really liked go shopping with my friends. At the weekend, I usually go to the market and iron the clothes. Please write and tell me about yourself. How old are you? What are your hobbies? What do you like most in your free time? What happens on a typical working day? See you soon and have a good time. Kind regards,
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Hope this email finds you well. I'm Dutch girl from a
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small
town near Amsterdam. I’m 24

years
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I
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live
together with my family and have five family members.
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I
'm interested in film

and movies. In my free time, I
really
like most watching Korean drama movies and K-pop

musics.
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Moreover
I'm
really
liked go shopping with my friends. At the weekend, I
usually
go to

the market and iron the clothes.

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Please
write and
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tell
me about yourself. How
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are you? What are your hobbies? What do

you like most in your free time?
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What
happens on a typical working day?

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See
you
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soon
and have a
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time.

Kind regards,

IELTS letter Read the email from Lucy, an exchange student. Then write a reply of about 100 words, answering Lucy's questions. To: From: Lucy Hi! I’m a student at Marwell High School in England and I’m your exchange student! Write to me and tell me about yourself. How old are you? What are you interested in? What’s a typical school day like at your school? What would you like to know about me?

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5 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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