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You should give your friend advice how to be efficeient for prepearing exams

You should give your friend advice how to be efficeient for prepearing exams XVGdY
Dear NozimaI am wtiring to give some advice you how to work efficiently before your exams. Firsty, you should be more energetic and calm before prepearing your exams. In order to be efficient you have to plan your day. You should study and revise all you have learned in fresh air almost in the morning. When you are tired you do your hosework. It helps you consentrate on your study and be relaxed. Due to be more energetic, keep eating healthy food. It also helps you be concentrated too. Never forget about having a rest when you are tired. I hope you follow my suggestions. Your sincerelyNafisa
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NozimaI
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wtiring
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advice you how to work
efficiently
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before
your exams.
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Firsty
, you should be more energetic and calm
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before
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prepearing
your exams. In order to be efficient you
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have to
plan your day. You should study and revise all you have learned in fresh air almost in the morning.
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When
you
are tired
you do your
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hosework
. It
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helps
you
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consentrate
on your study and
be relaxed
. Due to be more energetic,
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keep
eating healthy food. It
also
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helps
you
be concentrated
too. Never forget about having a rest when you
are tired
. I hope you follow my suggestions. Your
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sincerelyNafisa

IELTS letter You should give your friend advice how to be efficeient for prepearing exams

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