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Write a letter to Lucy giving some advice to her about how she can deal with her parents' scolding of talking on the phone

Write a letter to Lucy giving some advice to her about how she can deal with her parents' scolding of talking on the phone 2rb8j

Dear LucyI am very happy to hear about you. I am writing in reply to your letter asking for advice about your parents' objection to letting you talk with your friends on the phone. I understand how you feel and I try to give you some good advice. First of all, I would suggest you should not argue with your parents but try to explain to them calmly that your friends are important for you. Make it clear to them talking on the phone with your friends not to distract from your studying. On the contrary it's relaxing, useful for you to have some news and it takes you out of yourself. It might be good idea to tell them your friends are the same age as you and you all have the same problem. you should let them know that you discuss, compare notes with them about your studying, homework. On the other hand, your parents' restriction is true. Talking a lot on the phone is bad for your health. I would very much like to know if this was helpful. Best wishes Jane.

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