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You have just missed a friend's party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend; explain why you did not attend the patry; say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

You have just missed a friend's party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend; explain why you did not attend the patry; say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party. yNXkM
Dear Jane, I am writing to apologise for missing your party which you hold on last Sunday. Let me explain the incident in more details. As you know, I live in a new high building which was built a year ago. My flat is on the nineth floor. That day one thing was broken by my daughter in the bathroom. Then, not surprisingly thre was flood water. My neighbours who lived on the eighth floor were very upset. For this reason I had to repair it immediately. By the way, I am extremely sorry and sincerely apologise for not participating. However, you always come to my birthdays with our classmates. But do not worry, the next time I do try be on time and help you with all you needed. I believe that you will give me a chance to invite you to the new restaurant which was opened yesterday. I highly appreciate your forgivness. Best regards Yours Anna
Dear Jane, I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for missing your party which you hold on last Sunday.
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Let
me
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explain
the incident in more
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details
. As you know, I
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live
in a new high building which
was built
a year ago. My flat is on the
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nineth
floor. That day one thing
was broken
by my daughter in the bathroom. Then, not
surprisingly
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thre
was flood water. My
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neighbours
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
on the eighth floor were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
upset.
For this reason
I had to repair it immediately. By the way, I am
extremely
sorry and
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for not participating.
However
, you always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my birthdays with our classmates.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
do not worry, the
next
time I do
Probably a preposition is missing after 'try'.
try be
on time and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with all you needed. I believe that you will give me a chance to invite you to the new restaurant which
was opened
yesterday. I
highly
appreciate your
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forgivness
. Best regards Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Anna

IELTS letter You have just missed a friend's party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend; explain why you did not attend the patry; say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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