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You are going to apology your neighbour for noise

You are going to apology your neighbour for noise Ep3eB
Dear Mr. Johnson. Accept my sinserest apologies on yesterday's noise at the party with my friends. You knew we celebrated our passing on CEFR exam yesterday with my collegues. We were going to have a party at the restaurant but there were not any pleces for us at there. We should have booked it we could't. Then we had to make a party at my house. I admit that we interrupted you with unplesant noise. My collegues cheered a lot because of their happiness. Besides my warnings they couldn not stand dancing in a loud music. I would be happy If you admit my apology. Yours sincerey. Nafisa.
Dear Mr. Johnson. Accept my
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sinserest
apologies on yesterday's noise at the party with my friends. You knew we celebrated our passing on CEFR exam yesterday with my
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collegues
. We were going to have a party at the restaurant
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but
there were not any
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pleces
for us at there. We should have booked it we
Did you mean "couldn't"?
could't
. Then we had to
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make
a party at my
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house
. I admit that we interrupted you with
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unplesant
noise. My
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collegues
cheered a lot
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because
of their happiness.
Besides
my warnings they
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couldn not
stand dancing in a loud music. I would be happy If you admit my apology. Yours
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sincerey
.
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Nafisa
.

IELTS letter You are going to apology your neighbour for noise

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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