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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting ngN7

Dear Neighbours, I am writing this to let you know about the issues that I am facing regularly regarding the parking facility. Let me explain the situation in more depth. Out of the two major concerns, the first and the foremost is that people park in an inappropriate manner. Recently, on a couple of occasions, when I entered the parking area, I noticed that some of us are parking the vehicles without a sufficient gap in between that leads to inconvenience and ultimately, time-waste. Secondly, as we all are aware of the fact that space is restricted for one vehicle only, still I encountered an incident of incorporating two vehicles by the same family. Indeed, it creates a lot of chaos and mismanagement by parking in the wrong manner and double-parking. I'd like to suggest two possible approaches in order to deal with this. Firstly, we should try to park in a reverse manner so that it is more convenient for us to exit later. Secondly, it is the need of the hour that we should expand the existing space in order to accommodate more vehicles because a majority of the families have more than 1 vehicle. Could I suggest a get-together to discuss more ideas and overcome this thing on weekends preferably? Yours faithfully, ABC

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 and overcome this thing on weekends preferably
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Yours faithfully
,

ABC