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A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter .explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. XMyq
Hi Ravi, This is Anil from Bangalore, hoping you are good. Last night i had gone through your letter and came to know that are planning for Himalayas to enjoy your summer trip. As per your request, i will give you my best advice for you. Himalayas is one of the adorable spot in India to spend during summer. As it has many adventures like hill triking, snow mountains, lakes, beautiful sceneries, etc, you certainly will get great chances to travel with nature. A good camera helps you to capture various scenarios please don't miss it, have some good shoe pairs which helps you while trekking, walking through the forest. It is significant to carry some dry fruits like grapes, cashew nuts, etc, which gives good energy and less effort to carry. Always remember to maintain a mini medical kit which will help you in case of emergency. In the next few weeks, i will be having presentations with my clients due to this i might be not participating. I wish you a hapy journey. your's friendly, Anil Kumar P,
Hi Ravi,

This is Anil from Bangalore, hoping you are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
. Last night
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i
had gone through your letter and came to know that are planning
A determiner is probably missing here: "for the Himalayas".
for Himalayas
to enjoy your summer trip. As per your request,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will give you my best advice for you.

Himalayas is one of the adorable spot in India to spend during summer. As it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
adventures like hill
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triking
, snow mountains, lakes,
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beautiful
sceneries, etc, you
certainly
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
great chances to travel with nature. A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
camera
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
you to capture various scenarios
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
don't miss it, have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
shoe pairs which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
you while trekking, walking through the forest. It is significant to carry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
dry fruits like grapes, cashew nuts, etc, which gives
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
energy and less effort to carry. Always remember to maintain a mini medical kit which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you in case of emergency. In the
next
few weeks,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be having presentations with my clients due to this
Did you mean "I"?
i
might be not participating. I wish you a
Possible spelling mistake found.
hapy
journey.

Did you mean "your" or "yours"?
your's
friendly,

Anil Kumar P,
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IELTS letter A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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