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You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local comexplain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internshippany that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself

You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local comexplain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internshippany that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself poK9
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to express my sincere interest in the internship which you recently advertised. I am currently a graphic design student at Loyola University here in Chicago and am in my third year of study. I am from Chicago and have lived my entire life in the region and have also long been an admirer of your firm. I learned about the internship from an advertisement I saw last week in Crain’s Chicago Business newspaper. I am interested in finding an internship and frequently read this publication in search of suitable opportunities. The moment I saw your company’s advertisement, I knew the position was perfect for me. I would be a great addition to your team at Periscope because I am very passionate about graphic design, and also have an educational background that fits your firm’s criteria. I would love to explore this passion during an internship, and am also very familiar with your firm and the region. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Maria
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to express my sincere interest in the internship which you recently advertised.

I am
currently
a graphic design student at Loyola University here in Chicago and am in my third year of study.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am from Chicago and have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
my entire life in the region and have
also
long been an admirer of your firm.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
learned about the internship from an advertisement I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
last week in
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Crain
’s Chicago Business newspaper.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am interested
in finding an internship and
frequently
read this publication in search of suitable opportunities. The moment I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s advertisement, I knew the position was perfect for me.

I would be a great addition to your team at Periscope
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because
I am
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very
passionate about graphic design, and
also
have an educational background that fits your firm’s criteria. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to explore this passion during an internship, and am
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
familiar with your firm and the region.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

Maria
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IELTS letter You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local comexplain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internshippany that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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