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You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter Explain why you are writing Describe what went wrong with the meal and service Suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter Explain why you are writing Describe what went wrong with the meal and service Suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant KPV9
Dear M. Smith, As you know, I am a member at Fista sports organization, and we always have our meetings at your restaurant. I am writing you this letter to express my disappointment regarding the last meal we had at your prestigious restaurant. Unfortunately, yesterday, all the meals were not tasty at all and had a bad smell. For that reason, and since I am a regular customer, I called upon the chef to explain what could have went wrong. He just replied that there is nothing wrong with the food because he already check it. But how do you explain the intoxication of two members of our group? Therefore, I suggest you take this situation very seriously and sort it out as quickly as possible before anyone else gets rushed to the hospital. Not before solving this issue and assuring me that the situation is better than before, you can consider us not returning to your restaurant for our meetings. Thank you for your understanding. Sincerely yours, Jamati Jean Charles
Dear M. Smith,

As you know, I am a member at
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Fista
sports organization, and we always have our meetings at your restaurant.

I am writing you this letter to express my disappointment regarding the last meal we had at your prestigious restaurant.

Unfortunately, yesterday, all the meals were not tasty at all and had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
smell. For that reason, and since I am a regular customer, I called upon the chef to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
what could have
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went
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wrong
. He
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just
replied that there is nothing
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wrong
with the food
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because
he already
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check
it.

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But
how do you
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explain
the intoxication of two members of our group?

Therefore
, I suggest you take this situation
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very
seriously
and sort it out as
quickly
as possible
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before
anyone else
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gets
rushed to the hospital. Not
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before
solving this issue and assuring me that the situation is better than
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before
, you can consider us not returning to your restaurant for our meetings.

Thank you for your understanding.

Sincerely
yours,

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Jamati
Jean Charles
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IELTS letter You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter Explain why you are writing Describe what went wrong with the meal and service Suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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