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A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter .explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. o7kD
Hi ravi, This is anil from Bangalore, hoping you are doing good. It is nice that you are planning to participate in the summer campaign this year in your office. As requested i will give some advice which certainly helps you. campaigns certainly help you to interact with everyone better than in your office. There will be no boundaries as it is a trip everyone will be friendly. Try to socialize with your team, by participating in cultural activities during the journey. Same time show respect to elders which is significant at these places. Avoid discussing office things this is not the place for those chats, instead try to share your personal life like how your kids are studying, health status about parents, etc. . There are few negative aspects also like, chances are more to get some health issues like body pains, cold, cough, etc. carry some medicines for a safer side. be cautious while eating avoid eatables that you don't know. Carry extra clothes which might be helpful in some cases. I am also interested to come along with you but you know about my situation in the office, there are many targets which I have to reach in the coming weeks. I am wishing you a happy and safe journey. Your's Friendly, Anil
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. It is nice that you are planning to participate in the summer campaign this year in your
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campaigns
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help
you to interact with everyone better than in your
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office
. There will be no boundaries as it is a trip everyone will be friendly. Try to socialize with your team, by participating in cultural activities during the journey.

Same time
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show
respect to elders which is significant at these places. Avoid discussing
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office
things this is not the place for those chats,
instead
try to share your personal life like how your kids are studying, health status about parents, etc.
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negative
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like, chances are more to
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get
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some
health issues like body pains,
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cold
, cough, etc. carry
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some
medicines for a safer side.
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be
cautious while eating avoid eatables that you don't know. Carry extra clothes which might be helpful in
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some
cases.

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also
interested to
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come
along with you
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you know about my situation in the
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office
, there are
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many
targets which I
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have to
reach in the coming weeks. I
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am wishing
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Friendly,

Anil
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IELTS letter A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. . describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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215 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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