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letter about lost baggage

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to bring to your notice that I have forgotten a bag at Heathrow Airport. I had numerous bags with me and extremely tired as a result of the overnight flight. As such, I remembered about the bag only after I reached the hotel. Let me explain in more detail. I was on the EK505 flight from Dubai to London which landed at 04: 55 am at Heathrow Airport. The missing bag is maroon in color, built of sturdy plastic and is the size of a standard cabin trolley. It has some valuable jewelry which I will be giving to a friend as a wedding gift, along with some of my clothes. Would you kindly alert your staff to keep an eye out for the bag. I presume it would have been returned to the lost and found section. You can reach me on 6754312 once the bag is located so that I can come and pick it up I look forward to an immediate response from you. Yours faithfully, Sally
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to bring to your notice that I have forgotten a
bag
at Heathrow Airport. I had numerous
bags
with me and
extremely tired
as a result
of the overnight flight. As such, I remembered about the
bag
only
after I reached the hotel.

Let
me
explain
in more detail. I was on the EK505 flight from Dubai to London which landed at 04: 55 am at Heathrow Airport. The missing
bag
is
maroon in color
, built of sturdy plastic and is the size of a standard cabin trolley. It has
some
valuable jewelry which I will be giving to a friend as a wedding gift, along with
some
of my clothes.

Would you kindly alert your staff to
keep
an eye out for the
bag
. I presume it would have
been returned
to the lost and found section. You can reach me on 6754312 once the
bag
is located
so
that I can
come
and pick it
up


I look forward to an immediate response from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sally
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IELTS letter letter about lost baggage

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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