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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do RQ0k
Dear Sir, I have recently attendetd a bussiness conference that took place at your hotel The Prancing Poney on the 5th of November. I am inquiring about soome important documents that I regrettably forgot in your building. As I recall the conference took place in the central hall of your hotel that overlooks the parking area. I am very confident that I have left the papers on one of the chairs of the front lines you had placed in order for the meeting. These papers are enclosed within a red leatherd envelope with inscribed symbols upon it. In particular these documents are of extreme importance to me because of their nature. They are intended for a law case tha has been running for 3 years now and the resulution of it is to take place within this week. Therefore I will be needing them at the end of the week in order to submit them to the court alias I will be in much trouble and I will likely be loosing the case. I would request and impore you to ask your staff to conduct a thourough search in the hall and then send me the folder with urgent shipping service if possible, to the adress I enclosed within the letter. Please be certain to charge the mailing cost to my credit card that you have already on file. Yours faithfully, Lily James Thomson Turner
Dear Sir,

I have recently
attendetd
a
bussiness
conference that took place at your hotel The Prancing
Poney
on the 5th of November. I am inquiring about
soome
important
documents that I
regrettably
forgot in your building.

As
I recall the conference took place in the central hall of your hotel that overlooks the parking area. I am
very
confident that I have
left
the papers on one of the chairs of the front lines you had placed in order for the meeting. These papers
are enclosed
within a red
leatherd
envelope with inscribed symbols upon it.

In particular
these documents are of extreme importance to me
because
of their nature. They
are intended
for a law case
tha
has been running for 3 years
now
and the
resulution
of it is to take place within this week.
Therefore
I will
be needing
them at the
end
of the week in order to submit them to the court alias I will be in much trouble and I will likely be
loosing the
case.

I would request and
impore
you to ask your staff to conduct a
thourough
search in the hall and then
send
me the folder with urgent shipping service if possible, to the
adress
I enclosed within the letter.
Please
be certain to charge the mailing cost to my credit card that you have already on file.

Yours
faithfully
,

Lily James Thomson Turner
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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  American English
7 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
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