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You see an advertisement fot someone to live with a family and looks after child. Write a letter to parents explain why you would like job why you are suitable hoe you spend your free time

You see an advertisement fot someone to live with a family and looks after child. Write a letter to parents explain why you would like job why you are suitable hoe you spend your free time k6m18

Dear Mr and Mrs Collins, My name is carola. I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I'm writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you offering. I really would like to work with for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, know about different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I'm pretty sure there a lot of thing to see and try. I have previous experience looking after children. Currently I am working for an Irish family and take care of for children whose ages vary from three to eight. I have to say that I have never thought that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them and have learnt a lot. I'm really patient, tidy, reliable and hard working. In addition, I have just completed an First aids course. If I had the chance to live with you be great. I would spend my free time learning English, visiting turist attractions, trying local food and making new friends. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need further details and recomendations. Kind regards, Carola

Dear Mr and Mrs Collins, My name is Possible spelling mistake found.CarolCarlaCarolecarolcarolscanola
carola
. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 your advertisement in a magazine and I'm writing to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I would like to be considered
 for the position Did you mean "you're offering", "you are offering", or "you were offering"?you're offeringyou are offeringyou were offering
you offering
. I really
 would like to work with for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 experience for you and me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 like to travel, know about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cultures and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have never been to Australia This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I'm pretty sure there Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of things".a lot of things
a lot of thing
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 and try. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have previous experience looking after children. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 I am working for an Irish family and take care of for children whose ages vary from three to eight. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 say that I have never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them and have Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 a lot. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm really
 patient, tidy, reliable and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
. In addition
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 completed Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
First
 aids course. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I had the chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with you be great. I would spend my free time learning English, visiting Possible spelling mistake found.touristjuristpurist
turist
 attractions, trying local food and making new friends. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to contact me if you need further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and Possible spelling mistake found.recommendations
recomendations
. Kind regards, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphCarola.Carola!Carola?Carola:Carola,Carola;
Carola