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You went to a store to buy merchandise after reading a weekly flyer when you went to the store the stuff you wanted to shop was out of stock. Write a letter to the store manager.

You went to a store to buy merchandise after reading a weekly flyer when you went to the store the stuff you wanted to shop was out of stock. Write a letter to the store manager. Pge6E

I feel the need to bring to your attention an inconvenience in your store while i am shopping some goods in your shop. Allow me to explain what happened. My name is rutika chaudhari. I lives in PN park society. Two days ago i read the daily newspaper and I noticed that government should be imposed lockdown of one week. So immediately i decided to visit your shop and purchased some household things. But when i went their i saw that there are long queues in front of treasure house. Cause all people want to buy stocks. After-long waiting, Finally my turn came and i entered to shop i realised most of things are unavailable. I felt tense that time and decide to report dilemma. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action and arrangements of material. i want to buy soap, Tooothpaste, Toilet pepar and some other grocery like lentil rice etc. Your timely attention to this matter is needed.

I feel the need to bring to your attention an inconvenience in your store while Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am shopping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in your shop. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 what happened. My name is Possible spelling mistake found.retinaUticaRubikrutile
rutika
Possible spelling mistake found.Chauhan
chaudhari
. I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "live"live
lives
 in Possible spelling mistake found.InOnAnPAPCPM
PN
 park society. Two days ago Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 read the daily newspaper and I noticed that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should be imposed
 lockdown of one week. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 immediately Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 decided to visit your shop and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 household things. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 went their Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that there are long queues in front of treasure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Cause all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 stocks. After-long waiting, Finally
 my turn came and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 entered to shop Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the things") or simply say "most things".most of the thingsmost things
most of things
 are unavailable. I felt tense that time and decide to report dilemma. Thus
, I am expecting you to take immediate action and arrangements of material. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 soap, Possible spelling mistake found.Toothpaste
Tooothpaste
, Toilet Possible spelling mistake found.pear
pepar
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other grocery like lentil rice etc. Your timely attention to this matter is needed
. 