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You went to a store to buy merchandise after reading a weekly flyer when you went to the store the stuff you wanted to shop was out of stock. Write a letter to the store manager.

You went to a store to buy merchandise after reading a weekly flyer when you went to the store the stuff you wanted to shop was out of stock. Write a letter to the store manager. Pge6E
I feel the need to bring to your attention an inconvenience in your store while i am shopping some goods in your shop. Allow me to explain what happened. My name is rutika chaudhari. I lives in PN park society. Two days ago i read the daily newspaper and I noticed that government should be imposed lockdown of one week. So immediately i decided to visit your shop and purchased some household things. But when i went their i saw that there are long queues in front of treasure house. Cause all people want to buy stocks. After-long waiting, Finally my turn came and i entered to shop i realised most of things are unavailable. I felt tense that time and decide to report dilemma. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action and arrangements of material. i want to buy soap, Tooothpaste, Toilet pepar and some other grocery like lentil rice etc. Your timely attention to this matter is needed.
I feel the need to bring to your attention an inconvenience in your store while
i
am shopping
some
goods
in your shop.
Allow
me to
explain
what happened. My name is
rutika
chaudhari
. I
lives
in
PN
park society. Two days ago
i
read the daily newspaper and I noticed that
government
should
be imposed
lockdown of one week.
So
immediately
i
decided to visit your shop and
purchased
some
household things.
But
when
i
went their
i
saw
that there are long queues in front of treasure
house
. Cause all
people
want to
buy
stocks. After-long waiting,
Finally
my turn came and
i
entered to shop
i
realised
most of things
are unavailable. I felt tense that time and decide to report dilemma.
Thus
, I am expecting you to take immediate action and arrangements of material.
i
want to
buy
soap,
Tooothpaste
, Toilet
pepar
and
some
other grocery like lentil rice etc. Your timely attention to this matter
is needed
.
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IELTS letter You went to a store to buy merchandise after reading a weekly flyer when you went to the store the stuff you wanted to shop was out of stock. Write a letter to the store manager.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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