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Write a letter to your friend to come at your home on holiday vacation.

Write a letter to your friend to come at your home on holiday vacation. x21o1
Dear friend, You will be very glad to read this letter that I am calling you spend holidays with me at my home. I have made a plan to celebrate vacation holidays at my home, as my home is very big having a wonderful water park and situated at bank of the Beas river and there is a big restaurant by my house and we will enjoy to swim in water park and will eat delicious food from restaurant. There is also a big ground in my house to play hockey and I have also called other friends and we will also play hockey and will share old memory with each other and after over the game we will go to Verka milk plant situated near my home and will drink soups. Hope you will accept my request and will do come. I shall wait for this excitement. Your faithful, Ranjit.
Dear friend, You will be
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very
glad to read this letter that I am calling you spend holidays with me at my home. I have made a plan to celebrate vacation holidays at my home, as my home is
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very
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big
having a wonderful water park and situated at bank of the
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Beas
river and there is a
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big
restaurant by my
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house and
we will
The verb 'enjoy' is used with the gerund form: "enjoy swimming".
enjoy to swim
in water park and will eat delicious food from restaurant. There is
also
a
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big
ground in my
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house
to play hockey and I have
also
called other
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friends and
we will
also
play hockey and will share
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old
memory with each other and after over the game we will go to
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Verka
milk plant situated near my home and will drink soups. Hope you will accept my request and will do
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come
. I shall wait for this excitement. Your faithful,
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Ranjit
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to come at your home on holiday vacation.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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