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You are a manager of online magazine. You product was delayed during the impacting. You should write apology later

You are a manager of online magazine. You product was delayed during the impacting. You should write apology later ElEeD
Dear Mrs, I am writing to apologize for you. Your products which you have chosen was delayed. There were some reasons cause of late order. You know, our company is too huge so delivering the outputs is little difficult to us. Fothermore, during the month in our company a two-holiday was districted so our delivery services were stopped. During the holiday our transportation was being repeated. Our workers had a difficultly to find your address during delivering the drees which you wanted to buy. At the end of the letter, I would say that we deliver not only the products but also I promise you this situation will not repeated. I hope you will forgive for and understand our occlusion as I mentioned. Next time you will not face with this challenges. Your sincerely! Sarah.
Dear Mrs, I am writing to apologize for you. Your products which you have chosen
was delayed
. There were
some
reasons cause of late order. You know, our
company
is too huge
so
delivering the outputs is
little
difficult to us
.
Fothermore
, during the month in our
company
a two-holiday was
districted
so
our delivery services were
stopped
. During the holiday our transportation was
being repeated
. Our workers had a
difficultly
to find your address during delivering the
drees
which you wanted to
buy
. At the
end
of the letter, I would say that we deliver not
only
the products
but
also
I promise you this situation will not
repeated
. I hope you will forgive for and understand our occlusion as I mentioned.
Next
time you will not face with
this
challenges. Your
sincerely
! Sarah.
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IELTS letter You are a manager of online magazine. You product was delayed during the impacting. You should write apology later

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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