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Application letter which was applied to a local tour guide organization

Application letter which was applied to a local tour guide organization NmEp2

Dear Sir, I would like to apply for this job on account of being amazing. I would be most grateful if I were a local tour guide in your community. In a year I will be 24 and I have been working very hard to learn more foreign languages. It is exact that our city attracts so many guests and tourists every year. Moreover, its beautiful nature differs from others. I do want the job due to very enjoyable and liable. As you can see from my CV, I am an English teacher with 4 years of experience. Also my accent is quite good which this facet entices you certainly. I hope my all features will interest you. I worked another organisation as a tourist guide for 2 years and I had high experiment that year. Its codition was satisfactory but now I don't work there anymore. I called for internet settings to improve my English skills. But they didn't approve of it. They thought that it useless activity for organisation. I would be very glad if you could consider my application in your free time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Tom Brown

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