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Write a letter to airport manager to complain about the bad condition of the washrooms

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the pathetic condition of the washrooms at Doha International Airport that I noticed while travelling from Doha to Dubai. My name is Sam Bhattacharya and I have been a frequent traveller but this is the first time I noticed such filthy airport washrooms. While I was waiting for my flight back to Dubai scheduled at 1 P. M. and was already running 1 hour late. Moreover, I had a conference to attend post my arrival, hence, I decided to use the washroom to change my attire. But to my dismay, I encountered a disgusting, noxious and a grimy washroom. There was water all over the toilet and some of the cabins were not even flushed. Besides, there were no attendants or cleaners to tidy the restroom. To resolve this issue, I would want you to take strict action on the cleanliness of the washroom as this could spread diseases. Also, I request you to assure that the airport washroom is not left unattended and there are cleaners sweeping and drying the restroom at all times. I hope you will take timely action on this issue. Yours Faithfully, Daisy Shah
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the pathetic condition of the
washrooms
at Doha International Airport that I noticed while travelling from Doha to Dubai. My name is Sam
Bhattacharya
and I have been a frequent
traveller
but
this is the
first
time I noticed such filthy airport washrooms.

While I was waiting for my flight back to Dubai scheduled at 1 P. M. and was already running 1 hour late.
Moreover
, I had a conference to attend post my arrival,
hence
, I decided to
use
the
washroom
to
change
my attire.
But
to my dismay, I encountered a disgusting, noxious and a grimy
washroom
. There was water all over the toilet and
some of the
cabins were not even flushed.
Besides
, there were no attendants or cleaners to tidy the restroom.

To resolve this issue, I would want you to take strict action on the cleanliness of the
washroom
as this could spread diseases.
Also
, I request you to assure that the airport
washroom
is not
left
unattended and there are cleaners sweeping and drying the restroom at all times.

I hope you will take timely action on this issue.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Daisy Shah
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IELTS letter Write a letter to airport manager to complain about the bad condition of the washrooms

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  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
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