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You saw an advertisement recently and bought the advertised product Upon receiving the product you discovered that the information in the advertisement was incorrect Write a letter to the person responsible for the advertisement and say What is the

You saw an advertisement recently and bought the advertised product Upon receiving the product you discovered that the information in the advertisement was incorrect Write a letter to the person responsible for the advertisement and say What is the m15P8
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards with the product that I purchased from your store last week and i am really disappointed with the quality and the performance of the product. I purchased a Whirlpool Washing machine with water heating technology that was continuously being advertised on television from past few months. However, this in-built technology do not work the way it is getting advertise. The ad of Whirlpool Washer machine states that the water is heated up to 65 degree centigrade. And, this temperature will help to kill all the germs and give you a germ-free wash. But this is not the case. Yesterday when I started the machine and turned it to germ free mode, the water failed to reach the mentioned temperature in the advertisement. Instead, it barely reach a temperature of 25 degrees. I do not expect such quality of products from such a big brand. So, I would like to know if it this problem is specific to this single unit or not. If so, then I request you to change this product and suggest similar product of different brand. As i am looking for a product with a Germ free wash system. I will be waiting for your reply. Thank you Yours Sincerely Jayraj Patel
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards with the
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product
that I
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purchased
from your store last week and
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i
am
really
disappointed with the quality and the performance of the product.

I
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purchased
a Whirlpool Washing machine with water

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heating
technology that was
continuously
being advertised
on television from past few months.
However
, this in-built technology do not work the way it is getting advertise.

The ad of Whirlpool Washer machine states that the water
is heated
up to 65 degree centigrade. And, this temperature will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to kill all the germs and give you a germ-free wash.
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But
this is not the case. Yesterday when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
the machine and turned it to germ free mode, the water failed to reach the mentioned temperature in the advertisement.
Instead
, it
barely
Did you mean "reaches"?
reach
a temperature of 25 degrees. I do not
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expect
such quality of
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products
from such a
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big
brand.

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So
, I would like to know if it this problem is specific to this single unit or not. If
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so
, then I request you to
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change
this
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product
and suggest similar
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product
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
brand. As
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am looking for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
with a Germ free wash system.

I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you

Yours
Sincerely


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IELTS letter You saw an advertisement recently and bought the advertised product Upon receiving the product you discovered that the information in the advertisement was incorrect Write a letter to the person responsible for the advertisement and say What is the

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