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Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:•Introduce yourself•Explain that you plan to have a party•Invite your neighbour to the party

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: •Introduce yourself•Explain that you plan to have a party•Invite your neighbour to the party jRQk8
Dear Harry, I am Brooke, your new neighbour who shifted to your next building a week back. Earlier I stayed in Southend Circle apartments. I am working as Senior Manager in Insurance Company. After 15 years of savings my income I purchased this house. I am a party animal and I never leave a chance to share my happiness with my friends and family. Hence, I planned a party on last Sunday i. e 28th of this month. As we share common premises it is obvious that some party noise will disturb you. Therefore, I request you kindly excuse me if music and other activities disturb you. I promise to maintain low noise and avoid any circumstance which might jeopardise your peace. Also share my apologies to your family members as well. I take this opportunity to invite you and your wife and children for the above mentioned party. Your presence will not only make me happy but also boost party mood. I have planned some special games for children on that day and I am sure your children also enjoy party thoroughly. Ofcourse I have arranged for drinks and dinner for that day to everyone. Food allergies and priorities will be kept in view for pre arrangement if you mention a day before.
Dear Harry,

I am Brooke, your new
neighbour
who shifted to your
next
building a week back. Earlier I stayed in
Southend
Circle apartments. I am working as Senior Manager in Insurance
Company
.
After
15 years of savings my income I
purchased
this
house
. I am a
party
animal and I never
leave
a chance to share my happiness with my friends and family.
Hence
, I planned a
party
on last Sunday i. e 28th of this month.

As
we share common premises it is obvious that
some
party
noise will disturb you.
Therefore
, I request you kindly excuse me if music and other activities disturb you. I promise to maintain low noise and avoid any circumstance which might
jeopardise
your peace.
Also
share my apologies to your family members
as well
. I take this opportunity to invite you and your wife and children for the above mentioned
party
. Your presence will not
only
make
me happy
but
also
boost
party
mood. I have planned
some
special games for children on that
day and
I am sure your children
also
enjoy
party
thoroughly
.
Ofcourse
I have arranged for drinks and dinner for that day to everyone. Food allergies and priorities will be
kept
in view for
pre
arrangement if you mention a day
before
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: •Introduce yourself•Explain that you plan to have a party•Invite your neighbour to the party

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
214 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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