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Writing testWriting task 1 (a letter)You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say– Describe the equipment.– Ask for the features and specificati

Writing testWriting task 1 (a letter)You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say– Describe the equipment. – Ask for the features and specificati RNWap
Respected XYZ, I am writing this letter in context to the equipment for cars, which your company design and supplies around the world on demand. My name is Rachel and I am working as a Manager in a car manufacturing company, located in the capital of India, New Delhi. As we have our contracts with domestic as well as foreign renowned dealers of car parts, we are interested to make an order with your company also. Specifically, My company wants to order for electronic gear systems, which are recently launched by you. I found those based on quite advanced technology and will surely boost up our car sales, if installed. Besides this, please provide me with the details of estimated cost per set, how it works and what supportive gadgets are needed to make it function properly. In today's competitive era, we really need to adopt some modern technologies and innovative ideas to cope with it, otherwise we can face downfall in our sales any time. I hope to get a reply from your side at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Rachel.
Respected XYZ,

I am writing this letter in context to the equipment for
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cars
, which your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
design and supplies around the world on demand.

My name is
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Rachel and
I am working as a Manager in a
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car
manufacturing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
, located in the capital of India, New Delhi. As we have our contracts with domestic
as well
as foreign renowned dealers of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
parts, we
are interested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an order with your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
also
.

Specifically
, My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
wants to order for electronic gear systems, which are recently launched by you. I found those based on quite advanced technology and will
surely
boost up our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
sales, if installed.
Besides
this,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide me with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of estimated cost per set, how it works and what supportive gadgets
are needed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it function
properly
.

In
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today
's competitive era, we
really
need to adopt
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some
modern technologies and innovative
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
to cope with it,
otherwise
we can face downfall in our sales any time.

I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a reply from your side at the earliest.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rachel.
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IELTS letter Writing testWriting task 1 (a letter)You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say– Describe the equipment. – Ask for the features and specificati

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  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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