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Write a letter to your friend for missing the date with him on a day because you have planned Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either In your letter you should tell what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alter

Write a letter to your friend for missing the date with him on a day because you have planned Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either In your letter you should tell what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alter DlaOa
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you hale and hearty, first and foremost, I would like to apologize for not making it on previous Wednesday for coffee as we planned. Through this letter, I intend to justify my situation, hoping that you would understand and keep no grudges in your heart for me. On Wednesday, when I was all ready to leave for the agreed venue, my boss called me for an urgent discussion, you know my promotion is due from the past 6 months and these days are pretty crucial in terms of work and performance. We had an unplanned management meeting for which I had to prepare a slide pack. I tried calling you multiple times but owing to rainy weather signals were weak and the call was not getting through. I dropped you a message which came with a failure delivery status later as well. Nonetheless, we can plan our date again on the coming Tuesday for which I have already submitted my absence request to my boss and it got approved. We are going to meet at the same coffee shop but this time the plan is to watch a movie after coffee. Please let me know your availability so I can make certain arrangements in advance. Once again, I am extremely sorry for the incident which was purely unintentional. Looking forward to meeting you. Yours Truly, John
Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you hale and hearty,
first
and foremost, I would like to apologize for not making it on previous Wednesday for coffee as we planned. Through this letter, I intend to justify my situation, hoping that you would understand and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
no grudges in your heart for me.

On Wednesday, when I was all ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
venue, my boss called me for an urgent discussion, you know my promotion is due from the past 6 months and these days are pretty crucial in terms of work and performance. We had an unplanned management meeting for which I had to prepare a slide pack. I tried calling you multiple times
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
owing to rainy weather signals were weak and the call was not getting through. I dropped you a message which came with a failure delivery status later
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
well.

Nonetheless, we can plan our date again on the coming Tuesday for which I have already submitted my absence request to my boss and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
approved. We are going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
at the same coffee shop
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this time the plan is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
a movie after coffee.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know your availability
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
certain arrangements in advance. Once again, I am
extremely
sorry for the incident which was
purely
unintentional.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours
Truly
,

John
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend for missing the date with him on a day because you have planned Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either In your letter you should tell what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alter

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7 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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