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You saw an advertisement of an old car and contacted him why you are interested what extra info do you need? Arrange a meeting

You saw an advertisement of an old car and contacted him why you are interested what extra info do you need? Arrange a meeting g8GM7

Dear Mr. Kiran, I am writing this letter to express my interest in purchase of the vehicle you mentioned in a classified on Olx. I an Hari Kishore working as a software professional, currently residing in Miyapur which is close your location. Although there are many cars of the same make listed on the website, I particulary liked your red car as I am fond of the color. Not only the car is from a reputed brand but also scored good rating on the crash tests. In regards to details you mentioned, I would also like to know the validity of the insurance and if the vehicle is covered under any maintenance package. Usually vehicles covered having the latter feature would be hassle free for any periodic service to be done. Hence I would like to pay a visit to the location of your choice and agree on the amount you are expecting the car to be sold. I am currently working from home and will be available to come over on a short notice. Eagerly waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Hari Kishore

Dear Mr. Kiran,

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purchase
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Olx
. Did you mean "If" or is a comma missing ("I,")?IfI,
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an
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Hari
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Kishore
 working as a software professional, currently
 residing in Possible spelling mistake found.Dimapur
Miyapur
 which is close your location.

Although there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 of the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 listed on the website, I Possible spelling mistake found.particularparticularlyparticularsparticular y
particulary
 liked your red You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 as I am fond of the color. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 is from a reputed brand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 scored This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 rating on the crash This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
In regards to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 you mentioned, I would also
 like to know the validity of the insurance and if the vehicle is covered
 under any maintenance package. Usually
 vehicles covered having the latter feature would be hassle free for any periodic service to be done
.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I would like to pay a visit to the location of your choice and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 on the amount you are expecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 to be sold
. I am currently
 working from home and will be available to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over on a short notice.

Eagerly
 waiting for your response.

Yours sincerely
,

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Hari
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Kishore