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tell your friend about place of interest of vietnam

tell your friend about place of interest of vietnam JY01a
Dear Mira, It's great to know that you're coming to Viet Nam. What a pity you can spend one day in Ha Noi. There are so many interesting places in the city, but I think within: ne day you should be able to visit three places. The first place I suggest is Viet Nam National Museum of History. You like history, so it's a must-see place. There's an extensive collection of artefacts tracing ret Sam's history. They're arranged chronologically from primitive to modem times. The second place is Hoan Kiem Lake. It's one of the symbols of Ha Noi. There you can enjoy the beautiful scenery and visit Ngoc Son Temple. You can also have a look at the Old Quarter. Wander around the old streets and some ancient houses to explore Vietnamese culture. Conveniently, these places are close to one another, so we can walk around easily. Tell me when you're coming, so I can show you around these places. Look forward to seeing you soon! Best wishes.
Dear Mira,

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Nam. What a pity you can spend one day in Ha
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day you should be able to visit three
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Nam National Museum of History. You like history,
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tracing
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Sam's history. They're arranged
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is
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Hoan
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Lake. It's one of the symbols of Ha
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. There you can enjoy the
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Son Temple. You can
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Quarter. Wander around the
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streets and
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ancient
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to explore Vietnamese culture.
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, these
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are close to one another,
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we can walk around
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.

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me when you're coming,
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I can
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you around these places.

Look forward to seeing you
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Best wishes.
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IELTS letter tell your friend about place of interest of vietnam

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169 words
6.0
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