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email to friends about dificulty in english

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Hello, Maria It has been a long time since we met. How are you doing these days? Is your work still going well? Recently, I have learned English again in order to pursuit an IELTS certificate because I want to get a rewarding job. However, I'm completely worried about my writing abilities. As you know, IELTS writing requires a large number of vocabularies in a wide range of topics but it is impossible for me to remember them all. I tried to write it down many times on the note but it does not work. Furthermore, when I write essays, I feel like I'm running out of ideas and don't know how to structure them logically. My writing score is really terrible, consistently falling below band 5. I'm extremely nervous because I am in the lead-up to the exam. I know you have a fully operational command of the English language, demonstrated by your band score of 7. 0 in the IELTS exam. Could you give me some advice? Can you offer me some documents to improve my writing skills? And if you don’t mind, can you spend time correcting my essay? It will be a great help to me. You loving Friend
Hello, Maria

It has been a long time since we met. How are you doing these days? Is your work
still
going well?

Recently, I have learned English again in order to pursuit an IELTS certificate
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because
I want to
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get
a rewarding job.
However
, I'm completely worried about my
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writing
abilities. As you know, IELTS
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writing
requires
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
a large number of
vocabularies in a wide range of topics
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but
it is impossible for me to remember them all. I tried to write it down
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many
times on the note
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but
it does not work.
Furthermore
, when I write essays, I feel like I'm running out of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and don't know how to structure them
logically
. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
score is
really
terrible,
consistently
falling below band 5. I'm
extremely
nervous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am in the lead-up to the exam.

I know you have a
fully
operational command of the English language, demonstrated by your band score of 7. 0 in the IELTS exam. Could you give me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice? Can you offer me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
documents to
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improve
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
? And if you don’t mind, can you spend time correcting my essay? It will be a great
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help
to me.

You loving Friend
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IELTS letter email to friends about dificulty in english

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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