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You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets.

You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Da2yA
Hi Pat, I really enjoyed our weekend getaway and it was nice catching up with you. However, as I returned home I realized that I forgot my coat in your kitchen, I recall it putting it under the dining table where we had breakfast yesterday. It was a black feather coat with my initials on the collar area. I have important belongings on the coat that I put into the pocket. I put my purse together with my credit cards and debit cards. Also, my company ID. I really want to go back there but due to my prior commitment and toxic schedule today I cannot go back immediately. Can you send it through any company that ships valuable things like DHL or FedEx? I appreciate it if you can send it within today because I really need my company ID and my purse because I'm running out of money and I need to withdraw. Thank you so much, my Dear Pat. I hope you enjoy the weekend with me. Love, Maicka
Hi Pat, I
really
enjoyed our weekend getaway and it was nice catching up with you.
However
, as I returned home I realized that I forgot my coat in your kitchen, I recall it putting it under the dining table where we had breakfast yesterday. It was a black feather coat with my initials on the collar area. I have
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important
belongings on the coat that I put into the pocket. I put my purse together with my credit cards and debit cards.
Also
, my
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company
ID. I
really
want to go back there
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but
due to my prior commitment and toxic schedule
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today
I cannot go back immediately. Can you
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send
it through any
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company
that ships valuable things like DHL or FedEx? I appreciate it if you can
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send
it within
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today
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because
I
really
need my
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company
ID and my purse
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because
I'm running out of money and I need to withdraw. Thank you
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so
much, my Dear Pat. I hope you enjoy the weekend with me.

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,
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Maicka
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IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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