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You have just moved to a new house. Write an email to your friend, Ellen.

You have just moved to a new house. Write an email to your friend, Ellen. 7p5e3
Dear Ellen, I am writing this email to tell you about my new house. My family moved to our new house on Hung Vuong street two weeks ago. My new house is located in the city center where has a lot of buildings. It’s a big apartment. My house have four bedrooms, four bathrooms, one living room, one kitchen. Many furniture is comfortable. I very love it because it’s near the university where I am studying. Especially, the environment is clear in the morning, the people living around there are very friendly. The neShow Commentsighbor are willing to help others. By the way, we having a party in this weekend, would you like to come? I’m looking forward to seeing you on Saturday. Best wishes, An
Dear Ellen,

I am writing this email to
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tell
you about my new
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house
. My family
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moved
to our new
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house
on Hung
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Vuong
street two weeks ago. My new
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house
is located
in the city center where has
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a lot of
buildings. It’s a
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big
apartment. My
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have
four bedrooms, four bathrooms, one living room, one kitchen.
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Many furniture
is comfortable. I
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very
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love
it
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because
it’s near the university where I am studying.
Especially
, the environment is
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clear
in the morning, the
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people
living around there are
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very
friendly. The
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are willing to
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others. By the way,
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we having
a party in this weekend, would you like to
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come
? I’m looking forward to seeing you on Saturday.

Best wishes,

An

IELTS letter You have just moved to a new house. Write an email to your friend, Ellen.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
125 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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