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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest.

You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. E73ox

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to enquire about the position of property management. Last Tuesday, I saw a advertisement regarding this job in newspaper. I am very keen in that particular position due to i have a good knowledge of real estate in field because of i have 3 years experience in this field and currently, I am working in Particle complex as a manager. So, I believe that i can easily control this. Please tell me, How can i contanct to you for above position? . I sent my curriculum vitae for your refernece. I think I am suitable for this. I would be grateful. I am looking forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Malkeet Singh

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the position of property management. Last Tuesday, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 advertisement regarding this job in newspaper.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 keen in that particular position due to Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 knowledge of real estate in field Probable usage error. Use "because i" instead.because i
because of i
 have 3 years experience in this field and currently
, I am working in Particle complex as a manager. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I believe that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can easily
 control this.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me, How can i Possible spelling mistake found.contact
contanct
 to you for above position? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 my curriculum vitae for your Possible spelling mistake found.reference
refernece
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I am suitable for this. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.MarketMallet
Malkeet
 Singh