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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest.

You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. E73ox
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to enquire about the position of property management. Last Tuesday, I saw a advertisement regarding this job in newspaper. I am very keen in that particular position due to i have a good knowledge of real estate in field because of i have 3 years experience in this field and currently, I am working in Particle complex as a manager. So, I believe that i can easily control this. Please tell me, How can i contanct to you for above position? . I sent my curriculum vitae for your refernece. I think I am suitable for this. I would be grateful. I am looking forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Malkeet Singh
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about the position of property management. Last Tuesday, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
advertisement regarding this job in newspaper.

I am
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very
keen in that particular position due to
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i
have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge of real estate in field
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because of i
have 3 years experience in this field and
currently
, I am working in Particle complex as a manager.
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So
, I believe that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can
easily
control this.

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Please
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tell
me, How can i
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contanct
to you for above position?
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.
I
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sent
my curriculum vitae for your
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refernece
. I
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think
I am suitable for this.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be grateful.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Malkeet
Singh

IELTS letter You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
118 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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