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A friend of yours called Amin gave a party yesterday, which you enjoyed. Write a letter to Amin. In your letter you should thank him for the party; say what you liked best. Suggest when you could gather again. Write at least 60 words.

A friend of yours called Amin gave a party yesterday, which you enjoyed. Write a letter to Amin. In your letter you should thank him for the party; say what you liked best. Suggest when you could gather again. b2b6q
Hello, Amin How are you? I'm fine thank you very much. The party was very good yesterday. I am grateful you invited me to your birthday. I am glad to participate on your great day. I really liked I met all our friends there. Also the cake was very delicious and lovely. My birthday is on September 19th. I will be 16 years old. I invite you to my day. All our friends will come and we enjoy dancing. Birthday cake will be excellent. We play interesting games. We will have a good time. I will be happy if you come. I hope we will meet on that day. Love, Jenny
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Amin


How are you? I'm fine thank you
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much. The party was
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very
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yesterday. I am grateful you invited me to your birthday. I am glad to participate on your great day. I

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really
liked I met all our friends there.
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Also
the cake was
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very
delicious and lovely. My birthday is on September 19th. I will be 16 years
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. I invite you to my day. All our friends will
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come
and we enjoy dancing. Birthday cake will be excellent. We play interesting games. We will have a
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good
time. I will be happy if you
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come
. I hope we will
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meet
on that day.

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Love
,

Jenny
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IELTS letter A friend of yours called Amin gave a party yesterday, which you enjoyed. Write a letter to Amin. In your letter you should thank him for the party; say what you liked best. Suggest when you could gather again.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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