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The city's mayor ,Zoe Arvaniti,is considering requiring all city residents over the age of 16 to take health ans safety classes ,including first-aid training .The mayor wants to hear how the public feels about this idea.Write an email to the mayor;s office explaining your opinion.Give reasons to support your opinion.

The city's mayor, Zoe Arvaniti, is considering requiring all city residents over the age of 16 to take health ans safety classes, including first-aid training. The mayor wants to hear how the public feels about this idea. Write an email to the mayor; s office explaining your opinion. Give reasons to support your opinion. b2YkP

Dear Mayor Arvaniti Lately, I heard about your idea of all the city residents over 16 taking health, safety, and first-aid training classes. On the one hand, this idea is fantastic because everyone will be more knowledgeable about all of these things and will be ready to fight any bad situation better but on the other hand, this idea is too boring because people do have not the time it needs to take place in those classes and is also a bad idea. After all, this project will cost a lot of money where this money could be spent on something more valuable. In my opinion, I do not think that we need those classes because everyone knows what to do in a bad situation and is also time-wasting because you can do other things with your friends or your family and not spend hours on training. That was what I had to say about your idea and I hope to help you with my opinion and I also hope to help you to make the best decision in this case

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