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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter about it.

You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter about it. xamj6
Dear Jack, I am very concerned about high volume music at night in your house. I am struggling to get good sleep at night. Therefore, it affects my efficiency at work. Consequently, I am not able to focus on my work which affects the production of the whole team. You played music at high volume that causes disturbance. I am noticing it from last week. It does not mean I am stopping you to play music. I request you to play music at lower volume, so that you and I can enjoy music and sleep respectively. I hope you can understand and will take some actions regarding this concern. Thank you Your neighbour, Ahen
Dear Jack,

I am
very
concerned about high volume
music
at night in your
house
. I am struggling to
get
good
sleep at night.
Therefore
, it affects my efficiency at work.
Consequently
, I am not able to focus on my work which affects the production of the whole team. You played
music
at high volume that causes disturbance. I am noticing it from last week.

It does not mean I am stopping you to play
music
. I request you to play
music
at lower volume,
so
that you and I can enjoy
music
and sleep
respectively
. I hope you can understand and will take
some
actions regarding this concern. Thank
you


Your
neighbour
,

Ahen
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter about it.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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