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Letter to land lord about damage furniture in apartment

Letter to land lord about damage furniture in apartment WqmE0
Dear Mr. John, Hope you are doing well. I am Keny, tenant at your Sun Shine appartment on lord street. I, along with my family, moved to your apartmnet last week and was very excited about accomodation arrangements. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about damage furniture at appartmnet. My main concern is kitchen cabinet. All cabinate drawers are in pathenic condition. Most of drawers are broken. In addition to that sofa set is torn out and have many rusty scraches. Dinning table glass is broken and one chair is missing. Part from this, TV table in drawing room has uneven legs. I would highly appreciate if you could replace the dinning table and arrange one new chair. You need to call repairman for other repair work. You can have a cup of tea with us next saturday and look at condition of faulty furniture yourelf. I hope you will understand my problem and will do the needful as soon as possible. I am hoping to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Mary Jane
Dear Mr. John,

Hope you are doing well. I am
Keny
, tenant at your Sun Shine
appartment
on lord street. I, along with my family,
moved
to your
apartmnet
last week and was
very
excited

about
accomodation
arrangements.
I
am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about damage furniture at
appartmnet
.

My main concern is kitchen cabinet. All
cabinate
drawers are in
pathenic
condition.
Most of drawers
are broken
.
In addition
to that sofa set
is torn
out
and


have
many
rusty
scraches
. Dinning table glass
is broken
and one chair is missing. Part from this, TV table in drawing room has uneven legs.

I would
highly
appreciate if you could replace the dinning table and arrange one new chair. You need to call repairman for other repair work.

You can have a cup of tea with us
next
saturday
and look at condition of faulty furniture
yourelf
.

I hope you will understand my problem and will do the needful as
soon
as possible.

I am hoping to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mary Jane
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IELTS letter Letter to land lord about damage furniture in apartment

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
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