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The first of October is the day of teachers and coaches' professions.

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Dear my teachers! First of all, I would like to sincerely congratulate you, all educators working in the field of education, on the Day of Teachers and Coaches, and express my best wishes. Indeed, the hard work and courage of teachers and coaches, who dedicate their eyes, hearts and minds to the upbringing of the younger generation, deserves any high praise. We have been entrusted with the greatest wealth of our people - the fate of millions of our children, our dear sons and daughters, the future of Uzbekistan. And it is worthwhile to express our gratitude to the selfless people like you, who are fulfilling this task responsibly, to the creators of the future. I wish you blessings.
Dear my teachers!

First of all
, I would like to
sincerely
congratulate you, all educators working in the field of education, on the Day of Teachers and Coaches, and express my best wishes.

Indeed
, the
hard
work and courage of teachers and coaches, who dedicate their eyes, hearts and minds to the upbringing of the younger generation, deserves any high praise.

We have
been entrusted
with the greatest wealth of our
people
-
the fate of millions of our children, our dear sons and daughters, the future of Uzbekistan. And it is worthwhile to express our gratitude to the selfless
people
like you, who are fulfilling this task
responsibly
, to the creators of the future. I wish you blessings.
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IELTS letter The first of October is the day of teachers and coaches' professions.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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