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You saw an advertisement for a second-hand telescope. You are interested in buying it but the current owner is in another city. Write a letter to the owner. In the letter, mention: • Why you are interested in buying the telescope • Ask about the details of the telescope • How you propose to take possession given the physical distance

You saw an advertisement for a second-hand telescope. You are interested in buying it but the current owner is in another city. Write a letter to the owner. In the letter, mention: • Why you are interested in buying the telescope • Ask about the details of the telescope • How you propose to take possession given the physical distance j5BG1
Dear Mr. Karl, My name is Kane, I’m writing this letter regarding the advertisement which I have seen today in the newspaper about a used telescope. I very much interested to buy this telescope, as my brother is joining his graduation and looking for giving him a gift. The ad shows that the price is reasonable and the model is also suitable. However, I have gone through the features of the telescope, but I wish you to send me the details of the components and also a picture of it, so that I may ensure that condition of the lenses, finder-scope, eyepiece, mounting, tripods etc. , As the address posted in advertisement is far away from my residence, it would be easy to meet this Sunday at a mid-location between the distance that is at Telangana junction hotel at about 11. 30 am. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kane.
Dear Mr. Karl,

My name is Kane, I’m writing this letter regarding the advertisement which I have
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that the price is reasonable and the model is
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me the
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of the components and
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a picture of it,
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that I may ensure that condition of the lenses, finder-scope, eyepiece, mounting, tripods etc.
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As the address posted in advertisement is far away from my residence, it would be easy to
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this Sunday at a mid-location between the distance
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at Telangana junction hotel at about 11. 30 am.

I look forward to hearing from you
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Yours
sincerely
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Kane.
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IELTS letter You saw an advertisement for a second-hand telescope. You are interested in buying it but the current owner is in another city. Write a letter to the owner. In the letter, mention: • Why you are interested in buying the telescope • Ask about the details of the telescope • How you propose to take possession given the physical distance

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