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A college asked its graduates to give a speech to current students about their professional careers and future opportunities. You would like to participate. Write a letter and say - What you want to talk about - Why you think students will be interested in it - Suggest a suitable date and time for your speech

A college asked its graduates to give a speech to current students about their professional careers and future opportunities. You would like to participate. Write a letter and say - What you want to talk about - Why you think students will be interested in it - Suggest a suitable date and time for your speech D2noa

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in order to let you know about participating in a speech for college students about scope of job opportunities after completing their current studies. As I recently graduate from the ASM institution and in our annual meeting I would like to inform the students about current job opportunities that will help them to build their career. In today's era, digital marketing has broaden its way for young people and offers a lot of job options such as salesman, advertising manager and product analyst. Therefore, i want to tell current graduates about the ways to enter in this stream. As per my perception, listeners will be interested in this topic. First reason is that it is related to their course of studies. And secondly, digital marketing requires new people to promote the products and services of company. I would request you to allow me to speak after the prize distribution ceremony held on 21st July, 2021 that is supposed to finish at 2'0 clock. I will be ready at 2: 30PM after lunch break. I hope you will give me chance to express my views. Yours Sincerely, Jaspreet Kaur

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allow
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clock. I will be ready at 2: 30PM after lunch break. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will give me chance to express my views.

Yours Sincerely
,

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