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You have recently noticed an increase in traffic in your residential area. write a letter to the responsibility person at the local council to inform him/her about the problem and say

You have recently noticed an increase in traffic in your residential area. write a letter to the responsibility person at the local council to inform him/her about the problem and say kepRK
Dear sir/madam, My name is Navjot Kaur, I live in Nepean in Ottawa. I am writing this letter to talk about the traffic in a residential area. People are not following the rules and drive very fast. My house is located in the middle of town, It was built 2 years ago. In my area have a huge park where every evening children and elders people come to spend some leisure time. Most people have difficulties crossing the road because vehicles are coming at high speeds. In my area, another area has going on the construction thus their have big vehicles running all the time. I have few solutions if heavy-duty vehicles working after 8 pm it is a great help for traffic. and residential areas are not allowed the drive fast if people are not following the rules they have to pay a big fine. I wish please take a decision as soon as possible thus families feel more comfortable. Hoping you give me a positive reply. Thank youYours Faithfully, Navjot Kaur
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leisure time. Most
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, another
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has going on the construction
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big
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IELTS letter You have recently noticed an increase in traffic in your residential area. write a letter to the responsibility person at the local council to inform him/her about the problem and say

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