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Some members of my family are coming for a visit soon, and I want to take them out for a nice meal. Do you know a good restaurant somewhere near us?

Some members of my family are coming for a visit soon, and I want to take them out for a nice meal. Do you know a good restaurant somewhere near us? rYr8k
Dear Oskar, Hope you are doing well and thank you for the e-mail. There are many different variety of restaurants around this area but I let you know one of the best recommendetion for your family members as well as you. The restaurant is called Sally's. The last time I visit with my family was last Friday. It is located next to the shopping mall which is two blocks away from the station. You can enjoy the special dinner feautured Japanese style on every Friday at cheaper price. Also, the sunset you can see from the restaurant was fantastic and enjoy listening to cozy music. I highly recommend you all to go there and hope this helps. Best wishes, Kaho
Dear Oskar,

Hope you are doing well and thank you for the e-mail. There are
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Sally's. The last time I visit with my family was last Friday. It
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Japanese style on every Friday at cheaper price.
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Best wishes,

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Kaho
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IELTS letter Some members of my family are coming for a visit soon, and I want to take them out for a nice meal. Do you know a good restaurant somewhere near us?

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