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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had Jett some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you Jett the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention towards discussion that is happening to close the recreation center due to shortage of funds. This center has been a major source of gathering not for my family but also for my mates. Let me explain in more detail, people of all age group have been using this place to keep themselves fit as this place have beautiful greener. Here many various festivals and family gathering have being organized. People are deeply attached to this place as they go daily to share joys and sorrow with others and has become an integral part of their lives. Shutting down this center will have drastic impact on lives of locals as they will lose a place where to spend time in good atmosphere. Could you please reconsider decision to close this place? I am confident we together can help you in managing the park but dividing tasks between us and making sure things fall under budget. I look forward hearing from you. Your faithfully, Saurabh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to draw your attention towards discussion
that is
happening to close the recreation

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center
due to shortage of funds. This center has been a major source of gathering not for my family
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but
also
for my mates.

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Let
me
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explain
in more detail,
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people
of all age group have been using this
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place
to
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keep
themselves fit as this
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place
have
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beautiful
greener. Here
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many
various festivals and family gathering have
being organized
.
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People
are
deeply
attached to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
as they go daily to share joys and sorrow with others and has become an integral part of their
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lives
.

Shutting down this center will have drastic impact on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of locals as they will lose a place

where to spend time in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
atmosphere. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
reconsider decision to close this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
? I am confident we together can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you in managing the park
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
dividing tasks between us and making sure things fall under budget.

I look forward hearing from you.

Did you mean “Yours”? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Saurabh

IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had Jett some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you Jett the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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