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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Amit, Yesterday, I received your letter in which you were seeking my viewpoint on whether you should pursue college or job. I personally feel you should go after doing job. As per your skill set, doing job would be vital option rather than college, this will help you to gain practical knowledge of various subjects. Course content provided in college is usually theoretical which sometimes may become boring. In current job market, gaining practical knowledge is more important than academic degree. This fact you might have also observed in job vacancies. I feel you should try and make efforts to try for job in IT field probably near your area as this will provide you opportunity to learn latest technology, soft skill and gain expertise. Please let me know in case you need any assistance in this regard. Wishing you good luck for future endeavaors. Warm Regards, Saurabh Gulati
Dear Amit,

Yesterday, I received your letter in which you were seeking my viewpoint on whether you should pursue college or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. I
personally
feel you should go after doing job.

As per your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
set, doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
would be vital option
rather
than college, this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to gain practical knowledge of various subjects. Course content provided in college is
usually
theoretical which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
may become boring. In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
market, gaining practical knowledge is more
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important
than academic degree. This fact you might have
also
observed in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
vacancies.

I feel you should try and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
efforts to try for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in IT field
probably
near your area as this will provide you opportunity to learn
A determiner is probably missing here: “the latest”.
latest
technology, soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
and gain expertise.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know in case you need any assistance in this regard.

Wishing you
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good
luck for future
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endeavaors
.

Warm Regards,

Saurabh
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Gulati

IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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