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You saw an advert for the post of finance manager at the vacancy board. You want to apply for the same job. But, you have been late for applying for the same. Write a letter along with your resume to your prospective employer. In your letter • introduce yourself • talkaboutyourskills • reasonsforyourdelay

You saw an advert for the post of finance manager at the vacancy board. You want to apply for the same job. But, you have been late for applying for the same. Write a letter along with your resume to your prospective employer. In your letter • introduce yourself • talkaboutyourskills • reasonsforyourdelay 73yDX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to responding an advertisement published on 24th October on the vacancy board column. I believe that I am the right candidate for this job and therefore I have attached my resume for your reference. My name is Nikita; I have completed masters in finance from Delhi University. I am currently working as a " Assistant Finance" manager in Amazon, I am associated with the firm for last three years now. Furthermore, I have been in finance industry for last eight years now and I have expertise of dealing with such high net worth firm account; therefore, I consider that my experience will be suitable for this post. Let me explain the reason for submitting the application late, I met with an accident last week and got hospitalised for the entire week due to which I got late in applying for the post. I would request you to please consider my application. Attached are the hospital receipts for your references. I solicit your cooperation and will wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to responding an advertisement published on 24th October on the vacancy board column. I believe that I am the right candidate for
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job
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I have attached my resume for your reference.

My name is Nikita; I have completed masters in finance from Delhi University. I am
currently
working as
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Assistant Finance
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manager
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in Amazon
, I
am associated
with the firm for last three years
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now
.

Furthermore
, I have been in finance industry for last eight years
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now
and I have expertise of dealing with such high net worth firm account;
therefore
, I consider that my experience will be suitable for this post.

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Let
me
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explain
the reason for submitting the application late, I met with an accident last week and
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got
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hospitalised
for the entire week due to which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
late in applying for the post. I would request you to
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please
consider my application. Attached are the hospital receipts for your references.

I solicit your cooperation and will wait for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nikita.
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IELTS letter You saw an advert for the post of finance manager at the vacancy board. You want to apply for the same job. But, you have been late for applying for the same. Write a letter along with your resume to your prospective employer. In your letter • introduce yourself • talkaboutyourskills • reasonsforyourdelay

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181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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