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Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about Hanoi, your home town or your home village. You should use the following prompts:

Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about Hanoi, your home town or your home village. You should use the following prompts: BwdV9
Hi everyone, My name is Đức. I live in Soc Son district, Hanoi city. It is in the north of Vietnam. my hometown is famous for Giong temple. People here often travel around by both motorbikes, cars and public transport like buses. Because in the rural, traffic jams are unpopular in the place. So the air here is very fresh and peaceful. The people here are also very friendly. I love my hometown because this place has my family, my friends, my teachers and my lovely neightbors. And also because this is the place that created my very beautiful childhood. Although the air here is quite clean, I still do not like the way rubbish is handled here. For example, pet feces still appear on the roads. I promise to try to learn more useful things so that in the future I can contribute more to my hometown.
Hi everyone, My name is
Đức
. I
live
in Soc Son district, Hanoi city. It is in the north of Vietnam.
my
hometown is
famous
for
Giong
temple.
People
here
often
travel around by both motorbikes, cars and public transport like buses.
Because
in the rural, traffic jams are unpopular in the place.
So
the air here is
very
fresh and peaceful. The
people
here are
also
very
friendly. I
love
my hometown
because
this place has my family, my friends, my teachers and my lovely
neightbors
. And
also
because
this is the place that created my
very
beautiful
childhood. Although the air here is quite clean, I
still
do not like the way rubbish
is handled
here.
For example
, pet feces
still
appear on the roads. I promise to try to learn more useful things
so
that in the future I can contribute more to my hometown.
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IELTS letter Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about Hanoi, your home town or your home village. You should use the following prompts:

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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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