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write a letter of appication in a cafe

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position you mentioned on your advertisement, which I saw in your post on the internet. I am a twenty year-old student, at this time studying at Dong Nai University. I have work as a waitress in a coffee store for six months. I am hard-working and polite with people at all ages. Top it all, I have positive attitude, with some fastidious customers, I can meet their requirements and solve the problem on my own. Moreover, my responsibilities is making sure that their orders will be on time. I would be interested in having more details about the rate of pay per hour and I would be very grateful that you could let me know there is other work I have to do. I can be contacted If you need further information. I am available at any time for a formal interview.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position you mentioned on your advertisement, which I
saw
in your post on the internet.

I am a twenty year-
old
student, at this time studying at Dong
Nai
University.
I
have work as a waitress in a coffee store for six months.

I
am
hard
-working and polite with
people
at all ages. Top it all, I have
positive
attitude, with
some
fastidious customers, I can
meet
their requirements and solve the problem on my
own
.
Moreover
, my responsibilities is making sure that their orders will be on time.

I would
be interested
in having more
details
about the rate of pay per hour and I would be
very
grateful that you could
let
me know there is other work I
have to
do.

I can
be contacted
If you need
further
information.
I
am available at any time for a formal interview.
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IELTS letter write a letter of appication in a cafe

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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