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Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about your home town or your home village

Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about your home town or your home village 6ayQl
Hello everyone today i will tell you about my home town. My home town is in Hai Duong which is 60 km far from Ha Noi. It is in the north of Vietnam. Hai Duong is the land of many heroes. Hai Duong is famous for food such as green bean cake, anabas noodle, lychee Thanh Ha, . . . . In Hai Duong, people travel around by both private cars, motobikes, bicycles, and public transport like buses. Although Hai Duong is a peaceful city, but sometimes Hai Duong have traffic jams and accidients but i still love this city because the people in here is very friendly, hospitable, helpful. And here are so peaceful. In conclusion, i love this place very much. Thank you for listening!
Hello everyone
today
i
will
tell
you about my home town. My home town is in
Hai
Duong
which is 60 km far from Ha
Noi
. It is in the north of Vietnam.
Hai
Duong
is the land of
many
heroes.
Hai
Duong
is
famous
for food such as green bean cake,
anabas
noodle,
lychee
Thanh Ha
, .
.
.
.
In
Hai
Duong
,
people
travel around by both private cars,
motobikes
, bicycles, and public transport like buses. Although
Hai
Duong
is a peaceful city,
but
sometimes
Hai
Duong
have traffic jams and
accidients
but
i
still
love
this city
because
the
people
in here is
very
friendly, hospitable, helpful. And here are
so
peaceful.
In conclusion
,
i
love
this place
very
much. Thank you for listening!
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IELTS letter Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about your home town or your home village

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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