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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position you mentioned on your advertisement, which I saw in your post on the internet. I am a twenty year-old student, at this time studying at Dong Nai University. I have work as a waitress in a coffee store for six months. I am hard-working and polite with people at all ages. Top it all, I have positive attitude, with some fastidious customers, I can meet their requirements and solve the problem on my own. Moreover, my responsibilities is making sure that their orders will be on time. I would be interested in having more details about the rate of pay per hour and I would be very grateful that you could let me know some other work I have to do. I can be contacted If you need further information. I am available at any time for a formal interview.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 in your post on the internet.

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I
 have work as a waitress in a coffee store for six months.

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I
 am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-working and polite with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at all ages. Top it all, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 attitude, with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fastidious customers, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their requirements and solve the problem on my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. Moreover
, my responsibilities is making sure that their orders will be on time.

I would be interested
 in having more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the rate of pay per hour and I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful that you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other work I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do.

I can be contacted
 If you need further
 information. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am available at any time for a formal interview. 