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Dear Cham, Thank you for your email. I was very happy to hear about your daily life in Hung Yen, Viet Nam. I am writing to tell you about my typical day in Vinh Phuc. In the morning, I get up at 6 o'clock then I have personal hygiene and wear a uniform because it is a rule at my school. Before going to school, I have breakfast with my parents and brother, I often eat noodles or bread and drink milk. My school starts at 7. 00 am, it is not too far so I walk to the school. My lessons finish at 11. 00 am then I go home and have lunch with my brother because my parents have lunch at the company. In the afternoon, I help mum do the housework and relax by watching a film or listening to music. About 6. 00 pm, I play sports with my friends such as badminton or basketball. I have dinner with my family at 7: 30 pm. After dinner my parents watch TV, I study with my brother or sometimes we go to the supermarket. I usually go to bed at 10: 30 pm because I have school the next day. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Huong
Dear
Cham
,

Thank you for your email. I was
very
happy to hear about your daily life in Hung Yen,
Viet
Nam. I am writing to
tell
you about my typical day in
Vinh
Phuc
. In the morning, I
get
up at 6 o'clock then I have personal hygiene and wear a uniform
because
it is a
rule
at my
school
.
Before
going to
school
, I have breakfast with my parents and brother, I
often
eat noodles or bread and drink milk. My
school
starts
at 7. 00 am, it is not too far
so
I walk to the
school
. My lessons finish at 11. 00 am then I go home and have lunch with my brother
because
my parents have lunch at the
company
. In the afternoon, I
help
mum do the housework and relax by watching a film or listening to music. About 6. 00 pm, I play sports with my friends such as badminton or basketball. I have dinner with my family at 7: 30 pm. After dinner my parents
watch
TV, I study with my brother or
sometimes
we go to the supermarket. I
usually
go to bed at 10: 30 pm
because
I have
school
the
next
day.

Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Huong
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5 paragraphs
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5.5
Overall Band Score
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