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You saw a travel agency’s advertisement for a vacation abroad. Write a letter to inquire about booking this trip. In your letter: • describe the holiday you hope to take and why the advertisement appealed to you • describe what information you need from the travel agency before making your booking • request this information

You saw a travel agency’s advertisement for a vacation abroad. Write a letter to inquire about booking this trip. In your letter: • describe the holiday you hope to take and why the advertisement appealed to you • describe what information you need from the travel agency before making your booking • request this information m33VK

Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the vacation advertisement your travel agency had given out in the newspaper three days back. For the last few weeks, I am planning a trip to Greece and was searching for some good vacation packages. Coincidentally this advertisement popped up and the trip which I am looking for is exactly like what you have mentioned with 4 nights and 3 days stay. It also covers some famous tourist attractions which are on my visiting list. The price also seems quite reasonable. The advertisement does cover most of the details about the trip but, I need a little bit extra information before going ahead with the booking. I would like to get details regarding the food arrangements like types of dishes on the menu and about the facilities available in the hotel room as I will be traveling with kids, so I need to be specific about these things. I would request you to assist me with the extra information and it would be a great help to me. I would be looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Manisha

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you regarding the vacation advertisement your travel agency had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 out in the newspaper three days back.

For the last few weeks, I am planning a trip to Greece and was searching for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 vacation packages. Coincidentally
 this advertisement popped up and the trip which I am looking for is exactly like what you have mentioned with 4 nights and 3 days stay. It also
 covers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 tourist attractions which are on my visiting list. The price also
 seems quite reasonable.

The advertisement does cover most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, I need a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 extra information This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going ahead with the booking. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 regarding the food arrangements like types of dishes on the menu and about the facilities available in the hotel room as I will be traveling with kids, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I need to be specific about these things.

I would request you to assist me with the extra information and it would be a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely


Manisha