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There have been some problems with trash removal in your town. Write a letter to the public official in charge of waste management. In your letter Describe the problems Explain how these problems have impacted your neighborhood Suggest some solutions

There have been some problems with trash removal in your town. Write a letter to the public official in charge of waste management. In your letter Describe the problems Explain how these problems have impacted your neighborhood Suggest some solutions 1AAGL
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a lifelong resident of Stanford Town. I am writing this letter to inform you of my deep concern about the complicated situation about the garbage accumulation in our city. I would like to offer some possible solutions to mitigate and hopefully solve this problem. Let me briefly explain the situation in a few words. For several weeks the recollection truck has not passed as frequently as it is supposed to do it. I do not know the reason, but the truth is that we have mountains of trash-backs everywhere in the streets. As result, pests and a terrible smell have begun to appear, making living there a really hard experience. Even walking on sidewalks has become almost impossible. As residents, we are extraordinarily worried about the consequences this situation can yield, especially regarding public health. I have been thinking about solutions to mitigate the problem, and I would like to propose two strategies. One possibility is to organize sanitization groups among residents and schedule some cleaning days. On the other hand, it can be considered the option of creating new collectors positions with fair salaries. I want to thank you for your attention to this letter. I am confident that this problem will be solved soon with your guide, and the common effort of the community. Sincerely, Pedro Ortiz
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a lifelong resident of Stanford Town. I am writing this letter to inform you of my deep concern about the complicated situation about the garbage accumulation in our city.
I
would like to offer
some
possible solutions to mitigate and
hopefully
solve this problem.

Let
me
briefly
explain
the situation in a few words. For several weeks the recollection truck has not passed as
frequently
as it
is supposed
to do it. I do not know the reason,
but
the truth is that we have mountains of trash-backs everywhere in the streets.

As result, pests and a terrible smell have begun to appear, making living there a
really
hard
experience. Even walking on sidewalks has become almost impossible. As residents, we are
extraordinarily
worried about the consequences this situation can yield,
especially
regarding public health.

I have been thinking about solutions to mitigate the problem, and I would like to propose two strategies. One possibility is to organize sanitization groups among residents and schedule
some
cleaning days.
On the other hand
, it can
be considered
the option of creating new collectors positions with
fair
salaries.

I want to thank you for your attention to this letter. I am confident that this problem will
be solved
soon
with your guide, and the common effort of the community.

Sincerely
,

Pedro Ortiz
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with trash removal in your town. Write a letter to the public official in charge of waste management. In your letter Describe the problems Explain how these problems have impacted your neighborhood Suggest some solutions

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
224 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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